A piece of history (Flaming Scarlet)

Okay so as most of you know i am writing a book. which is currently called FlamingScarlet.
and if i have aready told you or said it's too complicated then here the plot(simple version).

It is a bout a 15 year old girl called Scarlet, who lives in a band of theives called the shadows. one night The Guardians ( the queens soldiers) attack her camp killing her father. She is filled with rage and sadness, which unlocks something deep inside her, the ability to control fire.

After that day, her life is thrown upside down as she stumbles into her heritage, learns the story of Lefrayta, and hears of a prophecy of which she is a big part of.
Now she has to find the other five Keepers (A person who can control one of the other 5 elements) and put back together the pieces of the sacred heartstone, Which is the earth's only hope.

Oaky well thats kindof it in the most simple way possible and now, i will give the first part of the NEW introduction( sorry to all those people who had read my old one.)

Introduction
The lefraytain truth

Once there was a planet vile and barren, that was home to a powerful race of humans. This planet was known as Lefrayta.

The people that inhabited the planet lived in fear of the creatures and savages in the planets twisting forests and desert plains. But one day two young hearts were given the power to protect their people using their new found ability to control the six elements and so they travelled around trying to find away to save their people, but then one of the hearts became tainted and so turned on its friend. The two hearts battled long and hard and thus became the heart of good and the heart of evil, but no matter how hard they tried they could not kill each other because they loved each other. But then one day the heart of good could take it no more and went in search of a powerful leader of one of the allied tribes, and asked him to help. The leader said that he would help on two condition that, one the humans would one day leave Lefrayta, and two that they must give him one of their powers. She agreed. The leader of the tribe cast a powerful spell of the two hearts, which turned them to stone. As they turned to stone their powers left them, to be granted to whomever they chose. The heart of good, granted, Fire, water, air and light to her people, and keeping her promise, she gave the power of Earth to the tribes folk. But the heart of evil gave his power of darkness to a less loyal tribe, one that could betray the others in the blink of an eye, the stone heart of evil vanished. The new owners of the earth power, returned to heartstone of good to its people, who placed it on top of a tower where it protected them and kept Lefrayta at peace for thousands of years.